Author: sung_min
Reviewed by: weepingangel
Title - 4/5
The title already gives me an idea on to what the story is all about.
Appearance - 5/5
the color of the poster is not too bright and easy on the eyes. the poster is also nicely made.
Forewords - 6/10
the forewords just gave what is expected on the story. you could have given us a teaser on what will happen with the story, like a certain scene that will happen or a certain excerpt from one of the chapters
Storyline - 11/15
i've read too many best friend stories in winglin. but your story somehow had a twist in some way because from the very start, the two characters are already in love with each other.
Story Flow - 12/15
There are some parts in the story that are fast. You could be more details on some scenes in the story.
Character Development - 13/15
Good work on giving us details regarding the characters at the very start of the story.
Descriptions - 9/10
I can imagine myself as the leading lady of the story, which is a good thing :)
Correct spelling and grammar - 3/5
there are some misspelled and misused words, which made me confusesd. there are also some grammatical errors. try to double check the words that you are using.
Keeping Interest - 7/10
So far, you got me interested in the story. I love best friend stories, so consider me as your new reader :)
Ending - 0/5
Lets skip this part, since it's not yet complete, all right :)
Bonus Points - 3/5
1 point for making the reader as the lead of the story
2 points for always replying to your readers :)
Total: 70/95
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