Paris Review

Title: Paris
Author: Oblivious To The Obvious
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/obliviousparis/
Reviewer: weepingangel

Title - 5/5 - The title let me know where the setting of the story is. at least i could expect what would happen in paris
Appearance 4/5 - The poster and background is just right for the tone/mood of the story
Forewords - 9/10 - I love how you explained that Paris is a city of love, and what the character is feeling when she is in Paris. Again, the foreword gave me a clue on what the story would be
Storyline - 13/15 - I've never seen a story like this before, so kudos for making this kind of plot
Story Flow - 13/15 - The pacing is good. There are short chapters and long chapters. But it would have been good if you elaborated on what happened to Dara while waiting for Friday to come.
Character Development - 13/15 - You could have give a details of the characters before the story. But anyways, you described your characters throughout the chapters :)
Descriptions - 9/10 - You described the situation well, as well as the character's feelings. I could feel Ji Young's pain while reading it
Correct Spelling/Grammar - 5/5 - No wrong grammar or misspelled word
Keeping Interest - 9/10 - I enjoy reading this since it's a short story. Plus, the plot is exciting.
Ending - 5/5 - I love sad endings, and I love how you elaborated on what Ji Young is feeling when Dara is back in TaeYang's arms. Plus, you made and explanation of the ending, which is cool
Bonus Points - 2/5 - 1 point for choosing me to review the story and another point for the ending :)

Total: 87/100