Music is Life Review

Fanfic URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/ava_lava3/
Author: ava_lava
Reviewed by: myangelteuk

Title - 5/5
I like the title! It really fits with your story and how the characters lived. For some reason, though the title isn’t very eye-catching, I would still click on it.

Appearance - 4/5
I deducted a point because it kind of looked gloomy but it still looked nice. The background doesn’t interfere with the text so that’s good. I like the quote on the poster because in the story, music brought them all together.

Forewords - 10/10
You have everything that is needed to know about the story! I like that you put just a bit of a description about the characters rather than their whole personality because I think in a way, that would ruin the story.

Storyline - 15/15
Though the storyline is the same as other fanfics, you added something that other fics that has the same storyline that don’t. And that is music. For me, I really loved it! You also made it your own by adding things that other stories don’t. Which is the stink bomb!

Story Flow - 15/15
Not too fast or slow. Perfectly paced. Great job!

Character Development - 15/15
You developed the characters very well. Their personalities and persona matched and that’s really good. I think that you showed their personalities real well. That doesn’t often happen especially because this is an apply fic and also because sometimes people rush to get their applications in that they leave out certain details about themselves. I loved all of the characters personality.

Descriptions - 10/10
Very detailed and thorough.

Correct Spelling/Grammar - 5/5
Nothing is spelled wrong. The grammar is good and the vocabulary is stretched. I think that’s really good. Your writing is style is very nice

Keeping Interest - 10/10
It was very interesting! I really wanted to know more! You got me hooked on the prologue.

Ending - 5/5
Very unpredictable especially the part where Airah gets to dance with her stalker. I loved the ending especially because it was Wednesday!

Bonus Points - 5/5
Bonus for Junior! Well not really, but I really really loved your story! It made me cried at the end because it was Wednesday on Jewel’s wedding! And also, because I am in the story! I will really miss the story so I hope you writing something like this again! Hwaiting and good luck with your other stories.

Total: 99/100